The Dark Side of Pride...

Pride's affliction stiffens necks
that can, but will not bend;
gold and glory deceive the proud,
is there hope they'll ever mend?
A humble heart soothes the soul,
self-righteousness must flee;
the neck once stiff and surely stuck,
becomes now loose and free.

Lisa @ dverse poets has prompted us to pen a 44 word quadrille which must include the word 'bend' or any form of that word. Here's the link: Poetry that Bends




12 comments:

  1. Carol, I like how you split the Q in half, with the darkness of pride and the "humble heart." Pride seems easier to see while the humble heart rests in the quiets. Lovely poem.

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    1. Thanks, Lisa. I enjoyed writing to your prompt! Yes, the humble heart does rest in the quiets. :D

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  2. This poem makes me want to say, "AMEN!"

    Well written, Carol!

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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  3. What a great depiction of pride vs humility.

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  4. Nicely done poem.

    Arcadia Maria

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  5. I may fail the test, but I so agree Carol.

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