"I need a volunteer!" shouted the Captain of the Army. "Someone who is willing to go out on a limb. Anyone?"
The soldiers shuffled their feet, not daring to look at their Captain.
The Captain continued his exhortation, " I cannot guarantee you will come through unscathed. You may even lose your life. There will be no medals, nor will there be any accolades for you to receive. Yet, be reassured, there's a lullaby for suffering."
"Excuse me," came a gentle voice. "I will volunteer for this assignment for I know the words to that lullaby, Sir."
And with that a young man began to sing:
"Do not let your heart be troubled,
nor let it be afraid.
Let My perfect peace
calm you in every circumstance,
and give you courage and strength
for every challenge."
The Captain then knew, the right soldier had volunteered...
Bjorn, at dverse poets, has set the prompt to pen a 144 word prosery. It must contain the line "there's a lullaby for suffering" which comes from Leonard Cohen's song "You Want it Darker" The song's words in my story come from the Gospel of John Chapter 14 verse 27.
Here's the link: Prosery Leonard Cohen
Wow!!! Amazing write
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Thank you so much, Gillian! I wrote from my heart for this challenge.
DeleteHeart touching! Nicely done, Carol ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jay! :D
DeleteA different angle on the prompt words, Carol, and nicely done. The right soldier indeed.
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DeleteCarol, this has such a gentle strength to it. 💙 The quiet courage in your soldier’s voice makes the moment feel sacred.
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David
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Thanks, David. Glad you felt the gentle strength to it.
DeleteBeautifully written, Carol!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dwight. :)
DeleteCarol, I love how you pulled it together at the end. Very calming poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lisa. :)
DeleteLove the incorporation of the psalm...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bjorn. A great prompt to write to. I listened to Leonard Cohen's song 'You Want it Darker' and could feel the yearning in his words. I also discovered that the word 'Hineni' in the song means 'Here I Am' in Hebrew.
DeleteThat was beautiful, Carol!
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Thank you, Yvette.
DeleteThat's a soldier who's fought many a battle and knew where his strength and peace lay! Hallelujah! A well-told story, Carol.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dora. I totally agree with you that he had fought many a battle and that he knew Who walked with him.
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