Curiouser and Curiouser...

Perhaps my parents should have named me
Alice,
 after the girl who went through the glass of
looking.
Would have been more appropriate
for a
lass who often ventured down rabbit holes where
reason
was elusive, yet, they named me Carol ~ 'a joyous song
to sing.'

Laura, at dverse poets, has prompted us to write a poem of 10 lines with each 'even' line having only 2 syllables. The even lines should convey a little poem in their own right. The rest of the lines are without any particular format.
Here's the link: The Poetry of Names
 

20 comments:

  1. Being named after song isn't all bad. I can also see you as curious Alice.

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  2. I especially like your closing lines and your mini-poem within!

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  3. Curiouser and curiouser, indeed. I have a younger sister Carol, ‘a joyous song to sing’ because her birthday is twelve days before Christmas. Whereas we would both have chosen Alice. I love the internal poem!

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    1. Thanks, Kim! Curiously we were both of like mind for this poetry prompt. ;D

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  4. I didn't know the meaning of the name Carol so thanks for that. My late sister was a Carol too and I am doing a sort of memoir in 26(ish) objects for this year's A to Z Challenge and i just wrote a brief piece om Carol so I will have to include this nugget...

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    1. You're very welcome, Frewin55! The name Carol is not common these modern days but was in the 1950's and 1960's.

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  5. a joyous WaltMarie - no real regrets for Alice and a great mini poem from the evens

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    1. Thank you, Laura and thanks for the great prompt!

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  6. A joyous song your are, though you want to chase rabbits! Love it, Carol.💗

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    1. Thanks, Punam! I find names are very interesting to investigate.

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  7. Made me smile, Carol - love your writing!

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  8. Beautiful poem, Carol! Technically, your name is almost the same as the author who created Alice. ;-)

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  9. Such a wonderful muse on naming and identity, love the two poems.

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  10. Love the poem within a poem, Carol; somehow it seals the deal in your claim to both names.

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    1. Thanks, Dora! Yes, you 'got it' indeed! :D

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