An afterglow of indigo
signals the storm's now spent
as the wind ceases her howling
leaving the trees twisted and bent.
The clouds, once filled with rain,
have wrung themselves complete,
the greening of the wet earth below
now marches to nature's fresh beat.
Lillian, at dverse poets, is leading the charge for our quadrille of exactly 44 words. It must include the word 'indigo'.
Here's the link: Indigo Quadrilles
Some silky smooth rhyme. I like the "afterglow of indigo ".
ReplyDeleteThank you kindly, Mish!
DeleteBeautiful poem, Carol!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Awww, thanks, Yvette!
DeleteI love how this captures the aftermath of the spring storm, when you're ready for everything to get back to normal and 'green up'.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Kim!
DeleteThis is an easy read with lovely rhythm and rhyme. Love how you've captured the ending and aftermath of a storm.
ReplyDeleteI would have used fewer words but was mindful of the required 44 words. ;D
DeleteNice work, Carol! The afterglow of indigo perfectly captures the storm’s end and nature’s renewal.
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Thanks, David! :D
DeleteI love how you call the storm "she" and describe the aftermath with such specific imagery. The "afterglow of indigo" and nature renewing the earth...beautfully writ!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lillian and thank you for a great quadrille prompt!
Deletefor me, your poem "unfolds" like a parade! loved.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your lovely comment!
DeleteI can really feel the quiet coming after the storm
ReplyDeletePeace is tangible after a storm and causes one to breathe again.
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