After the Storm...

An afterglow of indigo
signals the storm's now spent
as the wind ceases her howling
leaving the trees twisted and bent.
The clouds, once filled with rain,
have wrung themselves complete,
the greening of the wet earth below
now marches to nature's fresh beat.
Lillian, at dverse poets, is leading the charge for our quadrille of exactly 44 words. It must include the word 'indigo'.
Here's the link: Indigo Quadrilles









 

 

16 comments:

  1. Some silky smooth rhyme. I like the "afterglow of indigo ".

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  2. Beautiful poem, Carol!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  3. I love how this captures the aftermath of the spring storm, when you're ready for everything to get back to normal and 'green up'.

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  4. This is an easy read with lovely rhythm and rhyme. Love how you've captured the ending and aftermath of a storm.

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    1. I would have used fewer words but was mindful of the required 44 words. ;D

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  5. Nice work, Carol! The afterglow of indigo perfectly captures the storm’s end and nature’s renewal.

    Much love,
    David
    SkepticsKaddish.com

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  6. I love how you call the storm "she" and describe the aftermath with such specific imagery. The "afterglow of indigo" and nature renewing the earth...beautfully writ!

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    1. Thank you, Lillian and thank you for a great quadrille prompt!

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  7. for me, your poem "unfolds" like a parade! loved.

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  8. I can really feel the quiet coming after the storm

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    1. Peace is tangible after a storm and causes one to breathe again.

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