'Til Death Do Us Part...

 September was the month that caused the old man the most grief. He sadly remembered when out of the ninth month midnight had forever darkened his soul. Happiness was no longer attainable as far as he was concerned, for his wife had shot through with his best mate that dark night, leaving the man bereft. He vowed he would never forgive her. Never, ever!
Thus, alone he lived and alone he remained, until one particular day when there was a knock on his door. Upon opening the door, he found his wife standing there, bold as brass. She looked him in the eye and announced that she was back! No sorrow or regrets were expressed, nor did she seem bothered by what she had put him through.
Slowly the old man reached for the rifle that he kept behind the door...


Dora, at dverse poets, has prompted us to pen a prosery of 144 words, or less. We must include the line:
'out of the ninth month midnight' ~ which is from Walt Whitman's poem 'Out of the Cradle Endlessly Rocking.'

Here's the link: Prosery Today

12 comments:

  1. Somethings just seem fair… 🙂👍🏼

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    1. Hehe. Don't know where my story sprung from! ;D

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  2. Uh Oh! This is about to have a tragic ending. Well done.

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  3. An ominous title, Carol, and an ominous ending! I feel sorry for the old man, but I’m not keen on any kind of firearm, and can’t help wondering if he kept it there in anticipation of his wife’s return.

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    1. It's funny how with storytelling one can write all sorts of scenarios. :D

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  4. This gave me chills, Carol. All those long years and the wound had just been festering. Great storytelling!

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    1. Thanks, Dora and thanks for the prompt! Storytelling allows one to express scenarios that come from one's imagination! ;D

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  5. Yup... sounds like the guy in my story before the deed was done.

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    1. Yes indeed, Bjorn! I don't usually write this sort of scenario but decided to run with it. :D

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