Blue eyes didn't run in the family. It was green eyes all the way! Olive skin, green eyes and dark hair, seen generation after generation of the O'Connor dynasties. However, a spanner in the works was about to be witnessed.
Colleen O'Connor became pregnant. She wouldn't admit to who the father was but lived out the nine months with a smile on her face. When her baby was born, her family rallied to see the baby.
"Look!" exclaimed the grandmother. "There! You can see a very small patch of dark blue, framed by a little branch, pinned up by a naughty star!"
The baby indeed had blue eyes, with fine light eyelashes and eyebrows, which framed the baby's eyes. As for the naughty star? It was the grandmother's way of pointing out that Colleen had had an improper liaison, not that Colleen minded.
Kim at dverse poets has prompted us to pen a prosery of 144 words. It must include the following lines from 'Novel' by Rimbaud:
'There you can see a very small patch
of dark blue,
framed by a little branch,
pinned up by a naughty star.'
Here is the link: Prosery
Delightful story and lovely take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Di! I didn't know where this prompt would take me! :D
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ReplyDeleteYour Prosery piece made me smile, Carol. I love Colleen’s attitude, and the grandmother’s eye-twinkling response.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kim! ;D
DeleteSmiling I am....a sweet tale indeed. Love how you incorporated the lines here and that Colleen is the naughty star :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lillian! :D
DeleteLove the story and the art that accompanies .... well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Helen! [Ai artwork] :D
DeleteLove that the baby was received with love, though I wonder who that father might be.
ReplyDeleteWe will never know, Bjorn. ;D
DeleteColleen was indeed quite happy by all accounts! I love this realist story with its playful edge.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Paul! :D
DeleteClever!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Melissa!
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