Disappointment Personified...

Just a hint, a glint, 
an inkling, a twinkling
of her lover's intention to kiss;
she holds herself ready
with lips quite steady
not wanting for him to miss.
Her right hand he does take,
and gives it a shake,
she wasn't expecting this!



Mish @ dverse poets has challenged us to pen a quadrille of exactly 44 words, which must include some form of the word 'hint'. Here's the link: Can You Take a Hint?






 

14 comments:

  1. Oh Carol, I’m disappointed for her!

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  2. I enjoyed this. Great fun! She should have pouted more 😁

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    1. I'm not sure it would have done her much good, Lesley! Her 'lover' wasn't on the same page methinks! :D

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    1. Maybe he is, Bjorn. Or, perhaps her expectations were awry. :D

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  4. What a letdown! Lol! Great poem, Carol!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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